Talk:Mysteries Of Heartlake/@comment-34854065-20181218184937/@comment-26630331-20181218191804

I love it too!!! Just read it.

Btw, can I give you a piece of advice? I don't think I'm personally any world-great writer, but I've earned some good tips for writing. I really hope it's OK. If you don't want, just don't read it, okay? :) And of course you don't have to follow that advice:

After chapter's name is not. (until it's an intention).

After, person writes a space. For example I love pandas, slimes and stuff.

When someone says something to another person and you want to describe how they do it, you write, instead of. . For example "I love donuts," she said.