User blog:PandaPrincess7/Story Idea!

Hi,

I have a new story idea. The book will be called "The Magical Mystery at Mills Ranch". Here's the plot idea:

Jacqueline "Jacqui" Mills and her sister Annaliese "Anna" Mills, have always been good with horses, their father was the famous horse whisperer, Robert Mills. Now with their mother gone, they must fufill the legacy of their father. One day when the are grooming their horses Midnight and Cinnamon, when a mysterios white unicorn shows up holding a centuries old scroll. While the girls try to find their father's journal, more weird stuff happens. Will the mystery grow even crazier or will the girls keep the magic under control and hide it from the media?

So what do you think, I'll make a cover and probaly shorten the title, do you have any ideas for a new title based off the plot?